Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a clear, grammatically correct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and word order, avoid repetition, and keep the answer within 2–4 sentences. For example, start with “Yes, I did” (simple past), then explain who gave it to you and what you liked about it. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I did. My father bought me a red bicycle when I was seven, and I used to ride it every afternoon because it was light and easy to control. I remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without training wheels.

제안: Provide a direct answer followed by at least one specific reason or example to support your view. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “so” to make the response coherent. Aim for 2–3 sentences and include a bit of detail (who uses them, where, or why).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see commuters and students cycling to work or school, especially during warm months.

× Absolutely yes, because I was child very like bike and I remember my father buy a bike for me and I'm very like that. I don't. I don't know.

✓ Absolutely. Yes, because I loved bikes when I was a child, and I remember my father bought a bike for me and I liked it very much.

This sentence has multiple grammar problems that fall under sentence structure and verb tense/word order errors: (1) 'I was child' is incorrect — it requires the article and adjective order: 'when I was a child'. (2) 'very like bike' and 'I'm very like that' misuse 'like' as an adjective and wrong word order; use the verb 'love' or 'like' with correct object placement: 'I loved bikes' or 'I liked it'. (3) 'my father buy a bike' is wrong tense; the action happened in the past so use past simple 'bought'. (4) The repetition 'I don't. I don't know.' is unclear and unnecessary; likely the student was unsure but it should be omitted or clarified. Suggestion: break the ideas into shorter clauses, use past simple for past events, include articles where needed, and place adjectives/adverbs in the correct order (e.g., 'liked it very much'). These corrections fit the question's past-tense context.