Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حسّن قواعد الجملة وترتيب الكلمات واستخدم جملة موضوعية واضحة ثم قدّم تفاصيل قصيرة مترابطة. تجنّب الأخطاء الشائعة مثل "preferred spend" و"took a bus go to school"؛ استخدم صيغ الماضي الصحيحة وروابط بسيطة مثل "so" أو "because" لشرح السبب. احرص على ألا تتجاوز 4-5 جمل وبذل جهد لإضافة كلمة مفردة صحيحة بدلًا من كلمات مكررة.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents preferred to spend money on other things, so I usually walked or took the bus to school. I also worked part-time sometimes, which meant I had less time and money for a bike.

제안: استبدل التعبيرات المترددة واملأ الفراغات بكلمات واضحة. استخدم جملة افتتاحية مباشرة ثم قدّم سببًا أو مثالًا واحدًا داعمًا مع رابط منطقي مثل "because" أو "for example". تجنّب التكرار واللجوء إلى أصوات التردد (uh).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Saudi Arabia. They are a common mode of transport, especially in smaller cities and among young people, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips.

× And no, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents preferred spend money and other things.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents preferred to spend money on other things.

The modal/main verb structure is incorrect: after 'preferred' the infinitive with to ('to spend') or the gerund ('spending') is required. Also need the preposition 'on' before 'other things' to show what money was spent on. Suggestion: use 'preferred to spend' or 'preferred spending', and add 'on' before the object. Example: 'my parents preferred to spend money on other things.'

× I usually worked or took a bus go to school.

✓ I usually walked or took a bus to go to school.

The original mixes verbs incorrectly. 'Worked' is unlikely here; context implies traveling to school so 'walked' or 'rode' fits. Also 'go to school' needs the infinitive 'to go' when used after 'took a bus' or better use 'to' as preposition: 'took a bus to go to school' or simply 'took a bus to school.' Suggestion: choose the correct verb for the action (walked/rode) and include 'to' before destination. Example: 'I usually walked or took a bus to school.'

× A bikes are a quite, uh, popular in Saudi Arabia.

✓ Bikes are quite popular in Saudi Arabia.

The phrase has multiple errors: 'A' with plural 'bikes' is wrong—remove the indefinite article. 'are a quite' has extra 'a' and incorrect word order; 'quite popular' is correct. Also filler words like 'uh' should be omitted in written form. Suggestion: use plural noun without 'a' and place adverb before adjective: 'quite popular.'

× They are a comet uh mode uh, of transportation.

✓ They are a common mode of transportation.

'Comet' is a misspelling of 'common.' Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary 'a' before 'mode' is correct but with 'common' the phrase is 'a common mode of transportation.' Suggestion: correct spelling and remove fillers. Example: 'They are a common mode of transportation.'

× Many people uh, use, uh, bikes, uh.

✓ Many people use bikes.

Filler 'uh' and excessive commas should be removed. The simple present 'use' is correct to express general truth. Suggestion: write concisely: 'Many people use bikes.'