Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify tense and meaning, correct vocabulary, and make the answer concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief clause), then add one or two specific supporting details using correct past tense and linking words. Avoid irrelevant or incorrect words (e.g., “wife”).

예시: No, I didn’t have a motorbike when I was a child. Instead, I had a simple bicycle that my father gave me for my tenth birthday, and I rode it every day around the neighborhood until I grew taller.

제안: Be more concise and use accurate vocabulary and linking words. Begin with a clear opinion, then give two specific, coherent reasons or examples. Use words like “for example,” “such as,” or “because” correctly and keep sentences well-structured.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips to the market or nearby shops because they are inexpensive and convenient in crowded neighborhoods.

× No, I do not have a wife when I was a child that time I only ride a bicycle which gave my father on my birthday.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child. At that time I only rode the bicycle my father gave me for my birthday.

The student used incorrect pronoun 'wife' instead of 'bike' (word choice, treated here as pronoun/noun error) and mixed tenses. 'Do not have' is present tense but the context is past, so use past tense 'did not have' (Grammar problem type ID 12 and 5). 'That time' should be 'At that time' for correct preposition and phrase. 'Only ride' must be past 'only rode' to match past context (past tense issue). 'Which gave my father on my birthday' has incorrect word order and missing object: correct is 'the bicycle my father gave me for my birthday' (pronoun/object placement). Suggestions: use consistent past tense for past events, place time phrases correctly ('At that time'), and use correct object pronouns ('gave me').

× Yes, of course, I think bikes are very popular in my nation because nowadays many people use bikes when they go near our houses and such as if they go to the market and also sometime they go to the near their shops that time they use bikes.

✓ Yes, of course. I think bicycles are very popular in my country because nowadays many people use them for short trips, for example to go to the market or to nearby shops.

Multiple issues: 'bikes' is acceptable but 'bicycles' and 'my country' are more natural (word choice/article). The original has awkward phrasing and tense consistency. 'Use bikes when they go near our houses' is ungrammatical; use 'use them for short trips' or 'to go to nearby places' (sentence structure error, ID 26 and 6). 'Such as if they go to the market and also sometime they go to the near their shops' contains incorrect use of 'such as' and prepositions ('to the near their shops' wrong) and incorrect adverb 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (IDs 11 and 13). The corrected sentence simplifies and uses present simple 'are'/'use' appropriately for general truths. Suggestions: use clear connectors (for example), correct adverbs ('sometimes'), and proper prepositions ('to nearby shops'); keep present simple for general facts.