Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn về cấu trúc ngữ pháp và sử dụng vốn từ phù hợp. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó giải thích lý do với mệnh đề đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi trật tự từ (vd. “help me can go” nên là “help me go”). Ngoài ra nên dùng từ nối đơn giản để làm câu mạch lạc và giữ tổng số câu không quá 4-5 câu. Bạn nên sửa các thì và cấu trúc động từ (had / was) cho phù hợp.

예시: Yes, I did. My house was quite near my school, so my mother bought me a bike to help me go to school independently. I used it every day, and it saved me time compared to walking. I felt more confident and enjoyed the freedom it gave me.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cùng với diễn đạt lặp lại. Bắt đầu bằng câu trực tiếp (Yes/No/Not really) rồi nêu lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “however” để mạch lạc. Tránh từ thừa và sửa lỗi đại từ (the people → people) và cấu trúc mô tả thói quen (they tend to use). Thêm ví dụ hoặc so sánh ngắn để tăng tính thuyết phục.

예시: Not really. In my country, people prefer motorcycles and cars because they are faster and more convenient for longer distances. For example, many families use motorbikes to commute to work or run errands, so bicycles are mostly seen in parks or used for exercise rather than daily transport.

× Yes definitely because of my house is quite near my school so my mom bought me a bike in order to help me can go to school by myself.

✓ Yes, definitely. Because my house was quite near my school, my mom bought me a bike so I could go to school by myself.

The original sentence has several structure and grammar issues: 1) Run-on sentence and missing punctuation – break into two or more clauses for clarity. 2) Tense consistency – the question asks about childhood (past), so use past tense 'was'. 3) Incorrect modal/infinitive combination 'help me can go' – after 'help' use a bare infinitive or 'so I could' to express ability in the past. 4) Word order and redundancy – 'in order to help me can go to school by myself' is ungrammatical; use 'so I could go to school by myself'. Suggestion: split into smaller sentences, match past tense, and replace 'help me can go' with 'so I could go'.

× Maybe not because I know they people tend to use motorcycle and the cars more than the bike.

✓ Maybe not, because I know people tend to use motorcycles and cars more than bikes.

Errors include wrong pronoun 'they people' (should be just 'people') and incorrect pluralization/articles: 'motorcycle' should be plural 'motorcycles' when speaking generally, and 'the cars' should be 'cars'. Also 'the bike' should be 'bikes' for general statements. Suggestion: remove extraneous pronoun 'they', pluralize nouns for general habits, and omit unnecessary definite articles.

× You know with motorbike they can travel to everywhere they go out with their try to riding or spend time to riding by.

✓ You know, with motorbikes they can travel everywhere, go out, try riding, or spend time riding.

This sentence has multiple structural problems: 1) 'motorbike' should be plural 'motorbikes' for generalization. 2) 'travel to everywhere' is incorrect; use 'travel everywhere'. 3) 'go out with their try to riding' is ungrammatical – phrases like 'try riding' and 'spend time riding' are correct. 4) Remove unnecessary prepositions like 'to' before gerunds. Suggestion: simplify list of activities, pluralize nouns, and use correct verb+ing forms ('try riding', 'spend time riding').