Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, I did”), then give one or two brief supporting details. Use past tense consistently and avoid extra words. For example mention who gave it to you or how you used it. Keep it under five sentences and use a linking word if adding a second point (“and” or “so”).

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bike when I was seven, and I used it to ride to the park every afternoon. It helped me become more independent and gave me a lot of happy memories.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use correct vocabulary and grammar: say “many people” or “bicycles are popular,” and explain why (cost, convenience, traffic). Use linking words like “because” or “for example” to make your answer logical. Keep it to two or three sentences. Avoid filler sounds such as “uh.”

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to work or to go to the market, especially in busy cities with heavy traffic.

× Yes, of course I have a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time phrase 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' to match the past time reference. Also include the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: keep verb tense consistent with time expressions (use past tense for past events) and remember articles before singular nouns.

× Yes, in my country a lot uh, people usually use buy in everyday.

✓ Yes, in my country a lot of people usually buy bikes every day.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words. 'A lot' should be followed by 'of people'. 'Use buy' is ungrammatical; choose one verb: 'use' (if meaning ride) or 'buy' (if meaning purchase). Context implies frequency of riding, so 'buy bikes' or 'use bikes' depending on intent. Also 'in everyday' is wrong; correct phrase is 'every day' (two words) meaning 'each day'. Suggestion: decide the intended verb and use correct collocations: 'a lot of people' + 'usually use bikes' or 'usually buy bikes every day' (buying every day is unlikely), so 'a lot of people usually use bikes every day' is most natural.