Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more grammatical, concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and prepositions, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition. For example, say when you had the bike, who helped you, and one specific memory.

예시: Yes. I had a bright red bicycle with matching wheels when I was about six or seven. My father taught me to ride it in the park, and I remember the first day I could ride without his help, which made me very proud.

제안: Make your answer more natural and coherent by using correct word forms and linking words. Provide one or two specific reasons or an example to support your opinion. Keep it concise (max 4–5 sentences) and avoid small grammatical errors and repetition.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many cities have dedicated bike lanes and public bike-sharing systems. People prefer bicycles because they are affordable, convenient for short trips, and environmentally friendly.

× Yes, I had it was a bright red colored with matching wheels and my dad boat with me and when I was approximately 6 or 7 years old and I got a lot of enjoyable moments with with the bicycle.

✓ Yes, I had a bright red bicycle with matching wheels. My dad bought it for me when I was approximately six or seven years old, and I had many enjoyable moments with the bicycle.

This sentence contains multiple sentence structure problems (ID 26) and subject-verb agreement issues. The original mixes clauses without proper punctuation or connectors, uses 'it was a bright red colored' which is ungrammatical, repeats 'with', and uses 'boat' instead of 'bought' (likely a word choice error). Corrections: split into clear sentences, use 'a bright red bicycle' rather than 'bright red colored', change 'my dad boat with me' to 'my dad bought it for me' (correct verb and object), and use 'had many enjoyable moments' to express past experience. Use numerals written as words for small numbers: 'six or seven.' Suggestions: break long run-on sentences into shorter ones, ensure correct verb forms, and proofread for similar-sounding word mistakes.

× Absolutely yes. Bikes are one of the most popular transport tool in in my country even we have a special transport lines for bicycles and people use it because it is easy to use, easy to purchase and environmentally friendly transport.

✓ Absolutely. Bicycles are one of the most popular modes of transport in my country. We even have special lanes for bicycles, and people use them because they are easy to use, easy to purchase, and environmentally friendly.

This sentence has article and noun choice errors (ID 22) and plural/singular agreement issues (ID 1). 'Bikes' is acceptable colloquially but 'bicycles' or 'bikes' must be consistent with plural verbs/pronouns. 'One of the most popular transport tool' is wrong; use 'one of the most popular modes of transport' and 'lanes' instead of 'lines'. 'We have a special transport lines' mixes singular/plural. Also pronoun agreement: 'people use it' should be 'people use them' referring to bicycles. Corrections: use 'modes of transport' and 'special lanes', change pronouns to plural, and split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestions: ensure noun phrases match in number and use appropriate collocations (mode of transport, bike lanes), and match pronouns to their antecedents.