Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then optionally add a brief reason or detail using a linking word. Avoid unnecessary articles and awkward phrasing (e.g., say "a bike" not "the bike"). Keep to no more than 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family couldn't afford one at the time.

제안: Make the response clearer and more grammatical. Begin with a direct statement about popularity, then add a specific example or reason, connected by a linking word (e.g., "because" or "for example"). Avoid awkward phrases like "ready lives" and redundant words. Keep sentences short and precise.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting. For example, lots of workers and students ride bikes to work or school every day.

× No, I didn't have the bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The definite article 'the' implies a specific bike known to speaker and listener, which is incorrect here. Use the indefinite article 'a' for non-specific singular nouns. Suggestion: use 'a bike' when referring to any bike in general.

× Bikes are very popular in our country, except many people use this bike on daily basis to go for their work or do any sort of activities of their ready lives.

✓ Bikes are very popular in our country; many people use them on a daily basis to go to work or for other daily activities.

This sentence has several issues: 'except' is used incorrectly (should be a contrasting conjunction), 'this bike' is wrong when speaking generally, and pronoun number/agreement and prepositions are incorrect. Also 'on daily basis' needs article 'a', 'go for their work' should be 'go to work', and 'ready lives' is incorrect wording. Suggestions: replace 'except' with a semicolon or 'and', use plural pronoun 'them' to match 'bikes', include article 'a' in 'a daily basis', use 'go to work' and 'other daily activities' for clarity.