Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify tense and meaning, use a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, and add a brief reason. Keep it natural and concise (1–3 sentences). Use linking words to connect idea and reason.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was safer for me to use a car, so they preferred to drive me everywhere.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, organize supporting details with linking words, correct noun forms and word order, and give one specific example. Keep answers under five sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, people buy both sports bikes and classic models for personal use, and motorcycles are especially common for commuting in cities.

× No, I have no bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child). The student used the present tense 'have' instead of the past tense. Use 'didn't have' to match past-time reference. Suggestion: use past simple for possession in the past: 'I didn't have a bike.'

× When I was child my parents personally believed that it is an auto right at two drive.

✓ When I was a child, my parents thought it was better to have a car because it is easier to drive with two people.

Multiple issues: missing article before 'child' and awkward, ungrammatical phrasing. 'When I was child' needs 'a child'. 'Personally believed that it is an auto right at two drive' is unclear and ungrammatical. The sentence also mixes tenses; the main clause refers to the past so verbs should be past: 'my parents thought' and 'it was'. I rewrote the sentence to convey a plausible meaning: parents preferred a car because it is easier to drive with two people. Suggestion: include articles, use past simple for past beliefs, and express the cause clearly (e.g., 'they thought a car was better because...').

× Definitely in my country there are many options available in bike such as sports bike and also classic bly bikes P people can purchased bike and they drive personal use.

✓ Definitely, in my country there are many options available for bikes, such as sports bikes and classic bikes; people can buy bikes for personal use.

Problems addressed: incorrect preposition and noun phrase 'available in bike' should be 'available for bikes'. Plural agreement: 'sports bike' and 'classic bly bikes' should be 'sports bikes' and 'classic bikes'. 'P people can purchased bike' contains extra character, wrong verb form 'purchased' after modal/ability context and missing plural 'bikes'. Use 'people can buy bikes' (present simple to state general truth). Also add punctuation to separate ideas. Suggestions: use correct prepositions ('available for'), ensure plural agreement for count nouns, and use base verb after modal-like 'can' ('can buy').