Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural, start with a clear topic sentence then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid fillers like “uh” and repeat words. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., use protective -> cautious) and include a brief consequence or feeling to enrich the answer.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. My parents were very cautious about road safety, so they preferred I walk or take public transport; as a result, I only learned to ride in my late teens.

제안: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give one concrete reason and an example. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (use plural forms and avoid awkward phrasing). Use linking words (for example, because) to make it coherent.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country nowadays because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many teenagers, even 14-year-olds, ride bikes to school without having a license.

× Yes, it's very popular in my country nowadays.

✓ Yes, they're very popular in my country nowadays.

The pronoun 'it' refers to a singular noun, but 'bikes' is plural in the question. The student should use a plural subject and plural verb or a plural pronoun. Changing to 'they're' (they are) matches the plural noun 'bikes' and maintains present tense. Suggestion: Identify whether the subject is singular or plural and choose matching pronouns and verbs.

× Uh, even, uh, 14 years old, uh, kids are taking the bike without even license.

✓ Even 14-year-old kids are riding bikes without a license.

The original has multiple issues: '14 years old' should be the adjective form '14-year-old' when modifying 'kids'; 'taking the bike' is unnatural here — 'riding bikes' is the correct collocation; 'without even license' lacks an article and proper form — use 'without a license'. This correction uses the correct adjectival form, verb collocation, plural agreement, and articles. Suggestion: Use hyphenated age adjectives before a noun (14-year-old kids), use natural verb-noun collocations (ride a bike/ride bikes), and include articles with singular countable nouns (a license).