Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, accurate and use correct tense and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, I did.”), then briefly describe the bikes and explain reason with correct grammar. Avoid repetition and keep it under five sentences. Use linking words like “because” or “after” to connect ideas and correct verbs (ride, saw, hurt, was scared).

예시: Yes, I did. I had two bikes: a red two-wheeler and a pink tricycle. I never learned to ride the two-wheeler because after I saw my sister fall and hurt herself, I became afraid. Therefore, I stuck to the tricycle until I was older.

제안: Answer directly and give clear, specific reasons. Use correct vocabulary and grammar: say “popular” or “not very popular,” and explain with coherent reasons (e.g., safety concerns, lack of bike lanes). Use linking words like “because” and “therefore.” Keep it concise and avoid unclear phrases (“pet for bicycle,” “raising a bite”).

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in Thailand because there are few dedicated bike lanes and traffic can be dangerous. As a result, many people prefer motorbikes or cars for daily travel. Therefore, cycling is more common for leisure than for commuting.

× Yes, actually the two wheel is the red one and the four wheel is the pink one.

✓ Yes, actually the two-wheeler is the red one and the four-wheeler is the pink one.

The student used singular noun forms without correct compound noun or hyphenation. 'Two wheel' and 'four wheel' should be 'two-wheeler' and 'four-wheeler' (or 'two-wheeled bike' / 'four-wheeled bike') to correctly indicate types of vehicles and to match noun usage. Suggestion: Use standard compound nouns (two-wheeler, four-wheeler) or 'two-wheeled' + noun.

× But I never I never try to write it before because after I seeing my sister try to write it and she hurt herself so I fear about it.

✓ But I never tried to ride it before because after I saw my sister try to ride it and she hurt herself, so I was afraid of it.

Multiple tense errors: 'never try' should be past tense 'never tried' to match 'when you were a child.' 'After I seeing' is incorrect form; use past tense 'after I saw.' 'Try to write' appears to be wrong verb choice; context indicates 'ride.' 'I fear about it' should be past 'I was afraid of it.' Suggestion: Use past simple consistently for completed actions in the past and choose the correct verb 'ride.'

× I think it's not that much popular because in Thailand we didn't have a like a pet for bicycle that much and it's had a lot of new that raising a bite and got in a car accident.

✓ I think bicycles are not very popular because in Thailand we don't really treat bicycles like pets, and there are many recent increases in bike thefts and car accidents.

Mixed tense and incorrect expressions: 'it's not that much popular' is unnatural; use 'not very popular' or 'aren't very popular' (plural agreement). 'We didn't have a like a pet for bicycle' mixes past negative and odd phrasing; better: 'we don't really treat bicycles like pets.' 'it's had a lot of new that raising a bite and got in a car accident' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended 'there have been many recent increases in bike thefts and car accidents.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct noun choices. Suggestion: Use present simple for general statements about current popularity, use plural 'bicycles' and clear nouns like 'bike thefts' or 'accidents.'

× So I think it's not that much popular.

✓ So I think it's not very popular.

'Not that much popular' is an incorrect collocation. Use 'not very popular' or when referring to 'bikes' use plural 'bikes are not very popular.' Suggestion: Use natural adverb placement 'not very popular' and ensure number agreement with the subject.