Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I did.”), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and pronouns, avoid redundancy, and keep it under five sentences. For example, say when you had the bike, how you used it, and a specific memory or feeling.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike from the age of six and used it to ride to the park with my friends most afternoons. Because we rode together every day, I became quite confident at cycling and I remember feeling proud when I could do longer rides without help.

제안: Answer directly and then support with specific reasons or examples using linking words. Avoid filler words like “umm” and vague phrases. Mention who uses bikes, where, and why (e.g. commuting, exercise) to make your response more informative and natural.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular. For example, many people use bikes for exercise and short trips to the market, especially at weekends, and cycling clubs organise group rides which makes it a common leisure activity.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I really enjoy gliding them when I am going to hang out with my friend and I also enjoyed cycling.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I really enjoyed riding it when I went out with my friend, and I also enjoyed cycling.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses and uses incorrect verb forms and pronouns. 'Had' and 'was' set a past context, so main actions should be past: change 'enjoy' to 'enjoyed' and 'am going to hang out' to 'went out'. 'Gliding them' is incorrect for bikes; use 'riding it' (singular 'bike' -> 'it'). Also adjust conjunctions and commas for clarity. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for childhood events and use correct singular pronoun for a single bike.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I really enjoy gliding them when I am going to hang out with my friend and I also enjoyed cycling.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I really enjoyed riding it when I went out with my friend, and I also enjoyed cycling.

The pronoun 'them' refers to plural objects but 'a bike' is singular, so use 'it'. Also 'gliding' is not the typical verb for riding a bicycle; use 'riding'. Ensure pronoun matches the noun in number and gender (if applicable).

× It gives me really happy when I like.

✓ It made me really happy.

The sentence uses incorrect present tense and structure. 'Gives me really happy' is ungrammatical; use 'made me really happy' to match past context. Also 'when I like' is unclear and unnecessary; remove it. Suggestion: use correct verb 'make' with appropriate form and adjective 'happy' rather than trying to use 'really' with a noun.

× Let's see, yes, I think bikes are popular in my country like umm. I think people are enjoying doing cycling on the weekend.

✓ Let's see. Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. I think people enjoy cycling on the weekends.

The original mixes informal filler words and incorrect progressive form 'are enjoying doing cycling'. For habitual activities use simple present: 'people enjoy cycling'. Use 'on the weekends' (or 'at the weekend') for habitual timing. Remove redundant 'doing' and use 'cycling' alone. Also separate sentences for clarity.

× I think people are enjoying doing cycling on the weekend.

✓ I think people enjoy cycling on the weekends.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'the weekend(s)' correctly and use simple present for habitual actions. 'Doing cycling' is unnecessary and unidiomatic; use the verb 'cycling' alone. If referring to a habitual weekend activity, plural 'weekends' is more natural.