Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid unnecessary articles and repetitions, and use a linking word to add one specific detail. Also watch small collocation errors (e.g. "ride a bike" not "cycle it"). Keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike as a child. I often rode it with my older brother around our neighborhood after school, which made me feel very free. Because our area was quiet and safe, we could explore new streets and plan little races.

제안: Improve accuracy and clarity: remove filler words (e.g. "uh"), correct vocabulary mistakes ("riding" not "writing"), and give one or two specific reasons or examples to support your opinion using linking words like "because" or "for example".

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many children use them to get to school and for recreation. For example, after classes you can often see groups of kids riding around parks or streets, and many families prefer bikes for short trips because they are cheap and healthy.

× Yes, I had the bike when I was a child and I really enjoyed riding it with my older brother.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I really enjoyed riding it with my older brother.

The definite article 'the' implies a specific bike already known to listener; in general statement about possession 'a bike' is correct. Use 'a' for non-specific singular nouns. Suggestion: use 'a' when introducing something not previously identified.

× Yes, I think uh bicycles are popular in my country because almost every child has it and they enjoy it by writing bikes every day after school.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular in my country because almost every child has one and they enjoy riding bikes every day after school.

Pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring back to plural or generic 'bicycles' or 'every child'—use 'one' for a single item per child or 'them' for bicycles. Also 'writing' is a wrong verb; correct verb is 'riding'. Suggestions: use 'one' after 'every child has' and use 'riding' for using a bike.