Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question. To improve, make the response more concise, avoid repeating words (e.g., "bike" twice close together), and add a brief supporting detail that uses a linking phrase. Also correct small grammar points (use "wouldn't let me" or "didn't allow me to") and try to use a richer verb or phrase for variety.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike as a child because my father wouldn't let me ride one—he was worried I might get injured, so he preferred I play safer games at home.

제안: Your answer gives a reason, which is good. To improve, make sentences grammatically correct, avoid informal slang ("wanna"), use linking words smoothly, and provide a specific example or brief consequence. Replace vague phrases like "a few number of" with "few" or "not many," and capitalize or expand abbreviations properly.

예시: No, I don't think cycling is very popular in my country because there are few dedicated bike lanes. As a result, many people feel unsafe riding on busy roads and prefer other forms of transport.

× No, unfortunately I did not. That's because my father wouldn't allow me to ride any bike because he was afraid that I would get injured.

✓ No, unfortunately I did not. That's because my father wouldn't allow me to ride a bike because he was afraid that I would get injured.

The phrase 'any bike' is unnatural here; use the article 'a' with a singular countable noun. This is an article/quantifier choice tied to modal construction; replace 'any bike' with 'a bike' for natural English. Suggestion: say 'ride a bike' when referring to one example of the activity.

× No, in my opinion it is not popular and it is due to the fact that we have only a few number of Specialized Rd. lanes for for people who wanna ride bike. Thus it makes it hard for them.

✓ No, in my opinion they are not popular, and this is due to the fact that we have only a few dedicated bike lanes for people who want to ride bikes. Thus, it is hard for them.

Multiple issues: 'it is not popular' disagrees with plural 'bikes' or 'bicycles', so use plural 'they are not popular' (present tense agreement). 'a few number of' is incorrect; use 'only a few' or 'a small number of'. 'Specialized Rd. lanes' is unnatural — use 'dedicated bike lanes' or 'specialized bike lanes'. Duplicate 'for for' is an error. 'wanna' is informal and incorrect in written formal response; use 'want to'. 'ride bike' needs an article or plural: 'ride bikes' or 'ride a bike'. Also 'Thus it makes it hard for them' has ambiguous subject; use 'Thus, it is hard for them.' Suggestions: keep subject-verb agreement in present tense, avoid informal contractions like 'wanna', and use correct quantifier phrases ('a few', 'a small number of').