Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap daha doğal, akıcı ve dilbilgisi açısından doğru olmalı. Kısa ve net bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın, ardından olayın zamanını ve sonucu açıkça belirtin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri düzgün bağlayın ve zaman uyumuna dikkat edin. Örneğin geçmişte olmuş bir olayı anlatırken geçmiş zaman (past simple) kullanın ve gereksiz tekrarları azaltın.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it around ten years ago, and unfortunately I broke my leg while riding it. After that accident I stopped riding for a long time.

제안: Cevap daha yapılandırılmış ve spesifik örnekler içermeli. Görüşünüzü açık bir konu cümlesiyle belirtin, ardından sebepler ve karşılaştırmalar için mantıklı bağlaçlar kullanın. Belirsiz ifadelerden kaçının ve özellikle nerede bisikletin görüldüğünü netleştirin. Dilbilgisi için tekil/çoğul ve zaman uyumuna dikkat edin.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Compared with places like India or Italy, there are fewer cyclists here. You can sometimes see people cycling in parks or around historic sites, but overall cycling is much less common for daily transport.

× Yes I had a bike when I was child but it was about 1012 years ago and while I'm riding it I broke my leg. Then I haven't ride it after break my leg.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but that was about 10-12 years ago, and while I was riding it I broke my leg. After I broke my leg, I haven't ridden it.

The sentence mixes past simple and present tense incorrectly and has incorrect verb forms. Use past simple for completed actions in the past: 'I was a child', 'that was about 10-12 years ago', 'while I was riding it I broke my leg'. After a past event that continues to the present, use present perfect with the past participle: 'I haven't ridden it.' Suggestions: keep past events in past simple and use past participle with have/has for present perfect. Also add articles ('a child') and commas for clarity.

× I think it's not popular in my country because when I look other countries like India, Italy, Spain, I saw that there is so many bikers and in my country there is no actually in a castle area or gardens you can see them but.

✓ I don't think cycling is very popular in my country because when I look at other countries like India, Italy and Spain, I see many cyclists, whereas in my country you can only see them in some castle areas or gardens.

The original mixes tenses and has incorrect verb forms and prepositions. Use present simple for general opinions: 'I don't think', 'I see'. Use 'look at' not 'look'. Use plural noun form 'many cyclists' rather than 'so many bikers' (informal) and avoid unnecessary words like 'there is no actually'. Use 'whereas' to contrast ideas. Suggestions: use consistent present simple for general statements, correct prepositions, and use appropriate nouns and word order.