Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct yes/no or brief statement about your own experience, then add one or two specific details (where, when, or what kind of bike) using a linking word. Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because the park was quiet and safe, I quickly gained confidence and could ride without the training wheels by the end of summer.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant or incorrect words. Start with a clear direct opinion (e.g. “Yes, they are popular”), then support it with specific reasons and a linking word (because, for example). Avoid invented words; use simple accurate vocabulary about usage, transport, environment, or leisure. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, city cyclists use dedicated bike lanes to commute to work, and families often cycle together on weekends for recreation.

× Yes I do I yes I do. I really like bipolar in foreign country. Do you better look and pass?

✓ Yes, I do. I really like bicycles in foreign countries. Do you mean 'look better and pass' or 'look better and succeed'?,

Errors: This response contains several sentence structure and word choice mistakes. 1) Repetition and punctuation: 'Yes I do I yes I do.' repeats and lacks commas; it should be 'Yes, I do.' 2) Wrong word choice and form: 'bipolar' is incorrect and likely a confusion with 'bicycle' or 'bikes'; choose 'bicycles'. 3) Number and article: 'in foreign country' needs plural or an article: 'in foreign countries' or 'in a foreign country'. 4) The final question 'Do you better look and pass?' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is unclear. If asking whether someone 'looks better and passes' an exam, rephrase to 'Do you look better and pass?' but that still is odd. Suggest clarifying intent; possible corrections: 'Do you mean look better and pass?' or 'Do you think they look better and will pass?' Suggestions for improvement: pause to organize your thoughts, use simple clear sentences, check word choice (bipolar vs bicycle), ensure subject-verb clarity and correct prepositions/number. Also add appropriate punctuation.