Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答过于简短且有语法时态错误。应直接回答并用一到两句补充细节（如什么时候有、使用频率、对你的意义或一两个具体回忆），并使用正确的过去时。可以用连接词（例如: when, because, so）使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about eight and rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day because it was my main way to play and visit friends.

제안: 回答过于简短且缺乏支持细节。应先给出完整句子的观点，然后用一到两句具体说明（比如在哪些城市或人群更流行、为什么流行、举例说明或比较），并使用连接词（such as because, for example, especially）来组织信息。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities with heavy traffic. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap, convenient and avoid traffic jams.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

原句使用現在時態（have），但考官的問題是過去時態“Did you have... when you were a child?” 回答應與問題時間保持一致，使用過去時態（had）。改正為 “I had a bike.” 可以清楚表達過去擁有的事實。建議：當回答關於過去的事情時，將動詞改為過去式；如果想強調過去持續性可用“used to” 如“I used to have a bike.”