Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, verb tenses and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence using past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Avoid redundancy and limit to 3–4 sentences. For example, say you didn’t own a bike but often rode others’ bikes, mention where and who with, and give a brief reason or feeling.

예시: I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child, but I often rode bicycles that belonged to my family. For example, I used to ride around the park with my cousins and sometimes rode bikes from my grandfather’s bicycle shop. I enjoyed those rides because they felt freeing and were a fun way to spend time outdoors.

제안: Organize the answer with a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons and a brief example. Use comparative language correctly and improve grammar (e.g., 'faster', 'good for the environment'). Keep it concise (2–3 sentences) and use linking words like 'because' and 'however'.

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country; scooters are more common. This is because scooters are faster and more convenient for short trips, whereas bikes are seen as better for the environment and leisure cycling, so they are mostly used for recreation rather than daily commuting.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child, but I do have just riding a bike around the park or with my family because my grandpa's house is a bicycle store, so there are so many bicycles I can write.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I did ride a bike around the park or with my family because my grandpa's house was a bicycle store, so there were many bicycles I could use.

The sentence mixes present tense ('don't have', 'do have') with past time reference ('when I was a child'), causing a tense inconsistency (Present tense issue, ID 6). Use simple past for past facts: 'didn't have' and 'did ride'. Also change 'is' to 'was' to match past time. Replace 'I can write' (nonsense in context) with 'I could use' to express ability in the past. Suggestions: keep all verbs in past when referring to childhood and choose verbs that match the intended meaning (ride/use).

× No, I think, uh, the scooters are more popular than in than the bike because the scooter is more faster, but the bike is have a good at the nature. So we do have some bikes, but it's not really popular here.

✓ No, I think the scooters are more popular than bikes because scooters are faster, but bikes are better for enjoying nature. So we do have some bikes, but they aren't really popular here.

This sentence contains several errors: incorrect preposition and comparative structure ('more popular than in than the bike'), comparative form misuse ('more faster'), verb form and adjective use ('the bike is have a good at the nature'), and pronoun/number agreement ('it's not really popular here'). The main grammar problem type selected is Incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) because the phrase 'than in than' is wrong and prepositions are misused. Corrections: use 'than bikes' for comparison without extra preposition; use comparative correctly ('faster' not 'more faster'); use correct verb 'are' and adjective phrases ('better for enjoying nature'); match plural subject 'bikes' with plural pronoun 'they' and negative 'aren't'. Suggestions: simplify comparisons to 'X is more Y than Z', use correct comparative adjectives, and ensure verbs agree in number and tense.