Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Use correct tense and grammar, speak more naturally and concisely, and add one or two specific supporting details. Begin with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then use linking words to add details (for example: "When I was...", "I often...", "because..."). Avoid redundant phrases and keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it in the countryside with my siblings and cousins because the quiet roads and fresh air made our rides very enjoyable.

제안: Give a direct opinion with correct grammar and provide specific reasons or examples using linking words. Use plural form "bicycles" or "bikes", avoid filler words, and explain why they are popular (e.g., terrain, cost, culture, infrastructure). Keep answers clear and limited to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because much of the terrain is flat, which makes cycling easy. In addition, many people use bikes to commute short distances because they are cheap and convenient.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a young and I usually ride them at in the countryside with my siblings and my cousins because it was very joyful in that moment.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was young, and I usually rode it in the countryside with my siblings and cousins because it was very enjoyable at that time.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses: 'do have' (present) with 'when I was' (past). Use past tense 'had' to match 'when I was young'. 'I usually ride them' should be past 'I usually rode it' because 'bike' is singular so use singular pronoun 'it' (singular/plural issue and subject-verb agreement). Remove the extra preposition 'at' before 'in the countryside'. 'Joyful' describes a person; use 'enjoyable' to describe the experience and 'at that time' is the correct phrase. Suggestion: Keep consistent past tense for childhood memories, match singular/plural references, and use correct prepositions and adjective choices.

× I do think bike is a very popular in my country because usually in my country there is a lot of like the flat flat things.

✓ I do think bikes are very popular in my country because usually there are a lot of flat areas.

The original uses 'bike is a very popular' which is incorrect: use plural 'bikes are' to talk about popularity in general (singular/plural issue and subject-verb agreement). 'There is a lot of like the flat flat things' is ungrammatical: use 'there are a lot of flat areas' ('there are' for plural, 'a lot of' + plural noun). Remove filler 'like' and duplicate 'flat'. Suggestion: Use plural subject and verb for general statements and replace vague phrasing with specific nouns.