Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản và trật tự từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn; dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và nói lắp. Ví dụ: nói rõ tuổi, mục đích và phương pháp học (ví dụ: tập với bánh phụ hoặc cùng người lớn).

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was three. My parents gave me a small bike with training wheels so I could learn step by step, and an older sibling taught me how to balance and pedal.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và cung cấp các lý do cụ thể. Tránh tiếng ngập ngừng và lỗi ngữ pháp (số ít/ số nhiều, thì). Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý (for example, because, so). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể như: học sinh dùng xe đạp để đi học, giao thông hoặc tập thể dục.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among primary and secondary students, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many children ride to school or use bicycles for exercise on weekends.

× Yes, when I was a try.

✓ Yes, when I was three.

The student used the word 'try' instead of the number 'three', causing a wrong word choice and sentence structure error. Use the correct numeral word 'three' to indicate age. Also ensure the sentence completes the idea if needed (e.g., 'Yes, I had one when I was three.').

× I have a bicycle for me at the age of three to help me start one by step by step to be know how to ride a bike.

✓ I had a bicycle when I was three to help me learn step by step how to ride a bike.

Multiple errors: 'have' should be past tense 'had' to match 'when I was three' (past time). 'For me' is unnecessary. 'Start one by step by step to be know' is incorrect word order and verb forms; use 'learn step by step how to ride a bike.' Use base verb 'learn' plus object and 'how to' + base verb. Ensure tense consistency (past simple).

× The bicycle is quite popular in my country, uh, for, especially for students who is primary or secondary when we at the age, uh, grade of study Academy,

✓ Bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially among primary and secondary students at school.

Subject-verb agreement and noun number: use plural 'Bicycles are' rather than 'The bicycle is' when speaking generally. 'Students who is' is incorrect; use 'students' with plural verb or rephrase as 'students'. Simplify phrasing: 'among primary and secondary students at school.' Maintain plural forms for general statements.

× we doesn't have, we don't have enough, uh, enough old to write to, for ride a bike.

✓ we don't have enough time or facilities to ride a bike.

Grammar and word choice errors: 'doesn't' is wrong for plural 'we' (should be 'don't'). 'Enough old to write to' is meaningless; likely intended 'enough time' or 'enough opportunity/facilities' and 'ride' not 'write'. Rephrase to a clear subject-verb-object structure: 'we don't have enough time or facilities to ride a bike.'