Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable and relevant, but it is slightly disorganized, somewhat repetitive, and contains minor grammatical issues. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea (e.g. saying you didn't have a bike and then repeating you can't ride). Also correct tense and pronoun usage (e.g. 'I didn't learn' rather than 'I was not in'). Keep responses to a maximum of about 3–4 sentences to be concise and natural.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I watched my sister learn to ride while I preferred playing other games, so I never picked it up. As an adult I still haven't learned, mainly because I haven't had the opportunity to practice safely.

제안: This answer is clear and relevant with good reasons, but it is slightly choppy and contains minor punctuation and coherence issues. Improve by combining short fragments into a smooth, linked reply and add a specific example or brief comparison to strengthen your point. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example' and avoid sentence fragments.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are convenient for short trips and help riders avoid traffic congestion. For example, many commuters in Dhaka use bicycles to travel to work quickly and cheaply, especially in crowded neighborhoods where cars cannot move easily.

× Actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence is correct; no change needed. It uses past simple appropriately to describe a past state. Keep as is.

× In fact, I don't even know how to ride a bike yet as an adult.

✓ In fact, I still don't know how to ride a bike as an adult.

The original mixes 'yet' placement and sounds unnatural with 'as an adult'. Use present simple negative 'don't know' for a present state. Place 'still' before the verb to indicate continuation, and move 'as an adult' after the verb phrase for natural word order.

× When we were very little, my cousin and my sister, we were all playing and my sister learned how to ride a bike at the time and I was not in.

✓ When we were very little, my cousin and my sister and I were all playing; my sister learned how to ride a bike then, but I did not.

The original has redundant subjects ('my cousin and my sister, we') and an unclear expression 'I was not in.' Use a clear subject list 'my cousin, my sister and I' and split into two clauses for clarity. Replace 'at the time' with 'then' and 'I was not' with 'I did not' to indicate the action did not happen for the speaker. This fixes sentence structure and past tense consistency.

× Yes, bikes are very convenient and very easy to commute.

✓ Yes, bikes are very convenient and make commuting very easy.

'Easy to commute' is incorrect because 'commute' needs a noun or verb structure. Use 'make commuting easy' or 'are convenient for commuting.' Rewriting with 'make commuting very easy' corrects the adjective/adverb usage and creates a natural phrase.

× In our country.

✓ In our country, many people use bikes because it's very easy to move in congested places like Dhaka.

'In our country.' is a sentence fragment lacking a verb. Combine it with the following sentence to form a complete sentence. This preserves the intended meaning and fixes the fragment.

× Many people use bikes because it's very easy to move in congested places like Dhaka.

✓ Many people use bikes because they are very easy to use in congested places like Dhaka.

The pronoun 'it' is vague and does not clearly refer to 'bikes' (plural). Use 'they' to match the plural noun 'bikes.' Also change 'easy to move' to 'easy to use' for clarity and natural expression.