Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a more natural and slightly expanded response: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Avoid repeating words and filler like “umm.”

예시: Yes, I did — I had a bright red bike when I was about seven. It was my favorite toy and I rode it every day to visit friends, but I stopped using it often after I started secondary school.

제안: Provide a short opinion with a reason and a specific example. Use a linking word (for example, because) to make the answer coherent, and remove fillers such as “umm.”

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Taiwan because many people use them for short commutes and leisure. For example, cities like Taipei have extensive bike-sharing systems and many dedicated bike lanes, which makes cycling convenient and common.

× Yes, when I was a child I had a bike.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had a bike.

The sentence is grammatically correct. It correctly uses the past tense 'had' to match the time frame 'when I was a child', and word order is natural. No changes are needed.

× Yes, umm, the bikes are popular in Taiwan.

✓ Yes, umm, bikes are popular in Taiwan.

Using the definite article 'the' before 'bikes' generalizes incorrectly. When speaking about things in general, countable plural nouns usually appear without an article (e.g., 'bikes are popular'). Remove 'the' to make the sentence natural. Suggestion: say 'Bikes are popular in Taiwan.' or 'Yes, bikes are popular in Taiwan.'