Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is correct but too short and repetitive. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (where you used it, how it looked, or a brief memory). Use a linking word to connect the topic sentence and details. Keep it natural and avoid repeating words like “did” unnecessarily.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I often rode it around my neighborhood every afternoon. Because my parents lived close to a park, I learned to ride confidently there within a few weeks.

제안: The idea is understandable but the answer is unclear and ungrammatical. Begin with a clear topic sentence about popularity, then give specific reasons and an example using linking words (for example, because, so, for instance). Avoid vague phrases like “home task” and improve grammar (use plural/singular and correct word order).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For instance, many people use bicycles to go to the market or commute to work in nearby neighborhoods, which saves money and avoids traffic.

× Yes, I mean they are essential for doing some home task because it is easily accessible and very under budget.

✓ Yes, I mean they are essential for doing some household tasks because they are easily accessible and very inexpensive.

Errors involve subject-verb agreement, word choice, countability and noun form. 'Home task' is unnatural; use 'household tasks' (plural). 'It is easily accessible' uses singular 'it' but refers to 'bikes' (plural), so change to 'they are easily accessible' for agreement. 'Very under budget' is incorrect idiom/word choice; use 'very inexpensive' or 'cheap' to convey low cost. Also ensure plural agreement throughout. Suggest practicing subject-pronoun agreement and common collocations (household tasks, inexpensive/affordable).