Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap daha doğrudan ve akıcı olmalı; gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimeler azaltılmalı. Ayrıca kısa bir destekleyici detay ekleyerek neden bisikletin olmadığını ve nasıl paylaşıldığını belirtmelisiniz. Cümle yapısını sadeleştirip bağlaçlar kullanarak anlam akışını iyileştirin.

예시: No, I didn’t have my own bike as a child because I was the fourth child in a large family. We often shared my older brother’s bike, so I usually rode it only when he wasn’t using it.

제안: Cevap daha açık ve mantıklı bir yapı ile verilmelidir; belirsiz ifadeler ve sesli düşünme ('umm', 'uh') çıkarılmalı. Bir neden ve kısa örnek ekleyerek görüşünüzü destekleyin ve bağlaç kullanın.

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because many cities lack dedicated bike lanes. For example, people prefer cars or public transport since cycling can be dangerous on busy roads.

× Actually, no, I did not have a bike, uh, because, you know, I'm a, a fourth child, uh, in my family and my brother had a bike and we use.

✓ Actually, no, I did not have a bike because I'm the fourth child in my family and my brother had a bike and we used it.

The sentence had issues with article and pronoun reference related to singular/plural and verb form. 'a fourth child' should be 'the fourth child' to indicate a specific position; this is an article choice (closely related to singular identification). 'we use' is incorrect for past context; it should be 'we used it'. Suggestion: match articles to specificity ('the' for specific order) and keep past tense consistent: use past tense verbs and include the object 'it' when referring to 'a bike'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I don't think that because we are not, umm, the bike way, uh, around the city.

✓ I don't think so because bikes are not common around the city.

The original phrase 'we are not the bike way around the city' is ungrammatical. Use 'I don't think so' for that response and 'bikes are not common around the city' correctly uses present simple to describe general truth. Suggestion: simplify the structure and use correct noun phrase 'bikes' and adjective 'common'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× And no is it isn't popular.

✓ And no, they aren't popular.

The original has wrong word order and unclear subject. Use 'they' to refer to 'bikes' and negative contraction 'aren't' in correct order. Also place the negation properly: 'And no, they aren't popular.' Suggestion: ensure pronoun agrees with the noun it replaces and keep normal subject-verb order. Grammar problem type ID: 12