Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be grammatically accurate, concise, and more natural. Start with a correct past-tense topic sentence, then add a brief supporting detail with a linking word. Use correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., “I had a bike,” “taught me how to cycle,” “I learned quickly”). Keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father taught me how to cycle, and I learned very quickly. I used to ride it to the park every weekend.

제안: Improve grammar, word order and vocabulary, and add a linking word for clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details (examples, reasons, or results). Use terms like “bike-sharing apps,” “convenient,” and mention who uses them or where they are common.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country now because there are many bike-sharing apps. For example, you can borrow a bike through an app and ride around the city, which is very convenient for short trips.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using 'have' (present) is incorrect for a past-time question. Use 'had' to match the past context. Suggestion: Match verb tense to the time frame in the question; replace present simple 'have' with past simple 'had'.

× My father taught me how to cycling and I learned since successful.

✓ My father taught me how to cycle, and I learned successfully.

'How to' should be followed by the base verb, not the -ing form, so 'cycle' is correct instead of 'cycling'. The second clause has multiple issues: 'learned since successful' is incorrect structure and word choice. Use an adverb 'successfully' after the verb to describe how the learning happened. Also use past simple 'learned' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: Use 'how to' + base verb, and use adverbs (e.g., successfully) to modify verbs; keep past tense throughout.

× Yes, in my country nowadays have many share cycle app.

✓ Yes, nowadays in my country there are many shared bike apps.

The original sentence omits the existential construction 'there are' required to say that something exists. Also 'share cycle app' is ungrammatical: use 'shared bike apps' or 'bike-sharing apps'. 'Nowadays' indicates present, so present simple 'there are' is appropriate. Word order is improved by placing 'nowadays' at the start or before the clause. Suggestion: Use 'there are' for existence, use correct noun phrases ('shared bike apps' or 'bike-sharing apps'), and maintain proper word order.

× You can use the app to borrow the cycle to ride in the city and it is quite com.

✓ You can use the app to borrow a bike to ride around the city, and it is quite convenient.

Use 'borrow a bike' rather than 'borrow the cycle' unless a specific bike is meant. Use 'ride around the city' (preposition 'around') for movement within the city. The adjective 'com' is incomplete; 'convenient' expresses the intended meaning. Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: Choose appropriate articles ('a' vs 'the'), use correct prepositions for movement ('around' or 'in'), and use complete adjectives ('convenient').