Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tự nhiên hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (màu sắc, kỷ niệm) và kết thúc bằng câu tóm tắt. Tránh lặp từ, dùng động từ chính xác (ví dụ: "ride a bike", "I haven't ridden a bike"). Giữ độ dài 3–4 câu, dùng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (e.g., "and", "so", "but").

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bicycle when I was a child, and even my helmet was pink to match it. I used to ride it around the neighborhood with my friends every afternoon, which I remember fondly. However, I haven't ridden a bike for many years.

제안: Cần cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn, tránh tiếng ừ ừ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No/Partly), rồi giải thích với lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: sự thay đổi thói quen, phương tiện khác, an toàn). Dùng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., "popular", "children", "ride", "skateboard", "scooters"). Giữ 2–3 câu hỗ trợ, nối ý bằng từ liên kết (e.g., "however", "because").

예시: Partly. Bikes used to be very popular when I was a child, but fewer children ride them now because many prefer scooters or electronic toys. Also, parents often worry about traffic and safety, so they choose other activities for their kids.

× Certainly I think that always we all had a bike when we were a child.

✓ Certainly, I think that we all always had a bike when we were children.

Use present tense 'think' with past reference 'had' is okay but word order 'we all always' should be 'we all always' or better 'we all always had' and 'a child' should be plural 'children' to match plural subject. Suggestion: place adverb 'always' after subject and use 'children' for plural.

× I still remember that bike is was for pink.

✓ I still remember that the bike was pink.

The phrase 'is was for pink' mixes tenses and incorrect word order. Use past tense 'was' and place adjective 'pink' after noun; include 'the' for a specific bike. Suggestion: say 'the bike was pink.'

× Even the helmet was also pink.

✓ Even the helmet was pink.

Using both 'even' and 'also' is redundant. Keep one; 'even' alone emphasizes surprise. Suggestion: use 'Even the helmet was pink.'

× But it's been a very long time that I haven't bike.

✓ But it's been a very long time since I rode a bike.

The construction 'I haven't bike' is ungrammatical; use 'since' plus past simple 'rode' to indicate time since last action. Alternatively, 'I haven't ridden a bike' uses past participle with present perfect. Suggestion: 'It's been a very long time since I rode a bike' or 'I haven't ridden a bike for a very long time.'

× It's really popular when I was a child, but nowadays I even kids I I see that they do not usually ride a bike anymore.

✓ Bikes were really popular when I was a child, but nowadays I see that kids do not usually ride bikes anymore.

Mixes present 'it's' with past 'when I was a child.' Use past 'were' for popularity in the past. Remove filler 'even' and duplicate 'I'. Use plural 'kids' and 'bikes' for general statements. Suggestion: 'Bikes were really popular when I was a child, but nowadays I see that kids do not usually ride bikes anymore.'

× Umm, they're gonna ride like petting or something like that.

✓ Umm, they're going to ride electric scooters or something like that.

'Gonna' is colloquial; write 'going to.' 'Ride like petting' is incorrect phrase; likely meant 'electric scooters' or 'petrol-powered bikes'—choose appropriate noun. Provide clearer vocabulary. Suggestion: replace informal and unclear words with 'going to ride electric scooters'.