Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid redundant phrasing (e.g. “the first bicycle in my life”). Use a linking word if you add a detail.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bicycle when I was six, and my father taught me to ride it in our neighborhood park. I remember feeling proud the first time I rode without his help.

제안: Make the response grammatically correct, more specific, and use linking words to show reasoning. Start with a direct opinion, then add one specific example or reason. Use appropriate vocabulary like “popular mode of transport.”

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. Many people use them to commute to school or work because they are inexpensive and convenient, especially in crowded cities.

× Actually in my country people always ride bicycle and to school or work, so it is a popular transport way.

✓ Actually, in my country people always ride bicycles to school or work, so it is a popular means of transport.

Errors involve noun form and verb phrase structure. 'Ride bicycle' is incorrect: the countable noun 'bicycle' needs a plural when speaking generally ('bicycles') or an article. The phrase 'and to school or work' is ungrammatical because 'ride' should directly take the object and destination: 'ride bicycles to school or work.' 'Transport way' is non-native phrasing; use 'means of transport' or 'mode of transport.' Also add a comma after 'Actually' for clarity. Suggestion: use plural for general statements about people, place destination immediately after the verb, and prefer collocations like 'means of transport.'

× When I was six years old, I had the first bicycle in my life and my father taught me how to ride a bike.

✓ When I was six years old, I had my first bicycle and my father taught me how to ride it.

The sentence is understandable but awkward. 'Had the first bicycle in my life' is wordy and unidiomatic; use 'had my first bicycle.' Also replace the repeated noun 'bike' with the pronoun 'it' to avoid repetition. Tense (past) is correct, but wording should be simplified for natural English.