Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, use correct tense and grammar, reduce hesitations, and give one or two specific supporting details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a brief reason and a short example using linking words (for example, because / so / for instance). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child because my family didn’t focus on sports. Instead, I usually borrowed a neighbour’s bike when I wanted to ride. For example, I remember borrowing my friend’s blue bicycle to ride to the park once a week.

제안: Answer directly, correct vocabulary and grammar, use linking words to organize reasons, and give specific details or examples. Mention concrete factors (e.g. public transport, busy streets, hilly terrain, climate) and keep responses concise and coherent (2–4 sentences).

예시: No, bikes are not very popular in Hong Kong because public transport is extremely convenient and reliable. In addition, the city is crowded and hilly, and hot weather makes cycling uncomfortable for many people.

× 'I don't have a bike when I'm child because umm I'm not that kind of people that usually play sports, so I just spend very few time umm, doing sports, especially to umm playing a bike.'

✓ 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I'm not the kind of person who usually plays sports, so I spent very little time doing sports, especially riding a bike.'

'Present tense used where past tense is required and several related agreement issues: "don't have" should be past "didn't have" to match "when I was a child"; "I'm child" missing article and correct form: "I was a child"; "that kind of people" should be singular "the kind of person"; "who usually play" needs third-person singular "plays" to agree with person; "I just spend very few time" should be past "I spent very little time" and use "little" (uncountable) rather than "few"; "doing sports, especially to umm playing a bike" is ungrammatical — use gerund without "to": "doing sports, especially riding a bike". Suggestion: maintain past tense for childhood descriptions and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct quantifier choice.'

× 'Umm I remember that I always borrow umm bike.'

✓ 'I remember that I always borrowed a bike.'

'Borrow' should be in past tense "borrowed" to match "I remember" referring to past habitual action; article needed before "bike": "a bike". Also habitual past can use "used to borrow" as alternative. Suggestion: use past simple or "used to" for repeated past actions.'

× 'Umm it is not very popular in my country on bikes because Hong Kong is a very convenient city that umm, the studying sustainability is very good enough and there are lots of kinds of transport for us.'

✓ 'Bikes are not very popular in my country because Hong Kong is a very convenient city; public transport is very reliable and there are many types of transport available.'

'It is not very popular in my country on bikes' has wrong subject and preposition: use "Bikes are not very popular" (plural subject) and avoid "on"; "the studying sustainability is very good enough" is unclear and ungrammatical — likely meant "public transport is very reliable" or "studying sustainability" is incorrect phrase; "lots of kinds of transport" should be "many types of transport". Also change passive/structure to clearer present-tense general statement. Suggestion: use plural subject for general statements about bikes and simple present for general facts; replace unclear phrase with appropriate noun like "public transport" or "transport system'.

× 'So umm and also Hong Kong is very umm host city that it may be very sweat.'

✓ 'Also, Hong Kong is a very humid city and it can be very sweaty.'

'host city' is incorrect adjective choice here; likely meant "hot" or "humid"; "sweat" is a verb or noun, not an adjective — use "sweaty" to describe the feeling. "may be very sweat" should be "can be very sweaty". Suggestion: choose correct descriptive adjective (humid/hot) and correct adjective form "sweaty"; use modal "can" for general possibility.'