Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, tense consistency and naturalness. Use past tense for past situations, give a direct topic sentence then add a brief supporting detail. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences). For example, say you didn’t have one and explain why or what you used instead.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school or took the bus with my sister.

제안: Make vocabulary and grammar more natural and precise, and avoid redundancy. Use correct plural/singular forms and a linking word to add a specific reason or example. Keep to 1–3 sentences with clear supporting detail.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because many young people use them to commute to work or school. For instance, in cities with heavy traffic, cycling is often faster and cheaper than driving.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense ('don't have') with a past time reference ('when I was a child'). Use the past simple 'didn't have' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for events in the past: 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, bikes are really very popular in my country because most of the youngster use bikes for their daily routine.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because most of the youngsters use bikes for their daily routines.

There are multiple problems: 'youngster' should be plural 'youngsters' to match 'most of the', which requires a plural noun (singular/plural issue). Also 'daily routine' is better as plural 'daily routines' to indicate each person's routine. Suggestion: Use plural nouns with 'most of the' and match noun number with context: 'most of the youngsters use bikes for their daily routines.'