Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời nên dùng thì đúng (nên dùng quá khứ khi nói về thời thơ ấu), câu nên tự nhiên và ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để mở rộng. Cụ thể: 1) Dùng quá khứ đơn cho hành động đã xảy ra (I had, I went). 2) Viết/ nói đầy đủ câu (I had a bike. When I was younger, I sometimes went to my friend's house by bike.). 3) Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể để làm phong phú câu trả lời (ví dụ: how often, who you rode with, what kind of bike).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to my friend’s house after school, usually two or three times a week. It was a small red bicycle with a basket, and I enjoyed racing with my neighbours on weekends.

제안: Câu trả lời nên nêu ý chính rõ ràng và cung cấp lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ để kết nối ý, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và chọn từ vựng phù hợp. Cụ thể: 1) Sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh (I don't think so. Many people use motorbikes because bicycles are too slow.). 2) Bổ sung chi tiết hoặc so sánh để thuyết phục (ví dụ: khoảng cách, thời tiết, cơ sở hạ tầng, an toàn). 3) Dùng từ đúng số ít/ nhiều và mạo từ khi cần (a bike -> bicycles).

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient for longer distances and busy traffic. Also, the hot weather and lack of dedicated bike lanes make cycling less practical for daily commuting.

× Yes I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past tense. Using 'have' (present) is incorrect in this context. Use 'did' to answer a past simple question. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for punctuation. Suggestion: Pay attention to the time reference in the question and match the verb tense: use past simple for completed past events.

× When I was younger I sometimes go to my friend's house by bike.

✓ When I was younger I sometimes went to my friend's house by bike.

The time frame 'When I was younger' indicates past, so the verb should be in past tense. 'Go' is present simple and should be 'went'. Also add a comma after the introductory clause 'When I was younger' for clarity. Suggestion: Use past simple for habitual actions in the past (sometimes went).

× I don't think so. In my country many people have motorbike to go to everywhere because the bike is too slow.

✓ I don't think so. In my country many people have motorbikes to go everywhere because bicycles are too slow.

Several issues: 'motorbike' should be plural 'motorbikes' to match 'many people' (quantifier/plural agreement). 'to go to everywhere' is unidiomatic; use 'to go everywhere' or 'to go everywhere by motorbike'. Also 'the bike' is vague and singular; use 'bicycles' or 'bikes' plural to contrast with motorbikes. Maintain consistent plural forms when speaking about general categories. Suggestion: Match plural nouns with quantifiers (many people -> many motorbikes) and use natural prepositional phrasing ('go everywhere').