Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and concise, correct minor grammatical issues, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add a brief detail about when or where you learned and how it made you feel. Keep it to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, my grandfather taught me to ride it in the park near our house, and I remember feeling both excited and nervous at first. Because he was patient and encouraging, I learned to balance within a few days.

제안: Give a clearer topic sentence and more specific supporting details, and use linking words to organise your points. Avoid repetition (e.g., 'transports' and 'public transports') and provide one or two reasons or an example to support your opinion. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Not really — bikes are not very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or buses for convenience. For example, the roads are often busy and there are few safe bike lanes, so many people choose motorised transport instead.

× Yes, I had the bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The definite article 'the' implies a specific bike already known to the listener. The context asks generally whether the student owned any bike as a child, so the indefinite article 'a' is correct. Suggestion: use 'a' or 'my' depending on meaning ('a bike' for any bike, 'my bike' if referring to the student's own bike).

× No, bikes aren't popular in my country because people often use transports, public transports or cars instead of bikes and walking.

✓ No, bikes aren't popular in my country because people often use public transport or cars instead of bikes and walking.

The word 'transports' is not used in English in this context; 'public transport' (British English) or 'public transportation' (American English) is correct and uncountable, so it should not be pluralized. Also 'public transports' is incorrect. Suggestion: use 'public transport' or 'public transportation'. Additionally, consider replacing 'and walking' with 'or walking' or better: 'instead of walking' to clarify contrast (e.g., 'use public transport or cars instead of riding bikes' or 'use public transport or cars rather than walking' depending on intended meaning).