Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chỉnh cấu trúc để tự nhiên hơn, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và tránh lời nói thừa. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, rồi dùng liên từ phù hợp và chia câu để rõ ràng (không dùng “and but”). Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn (ví dụ: tuổi bắt đầu, khoảng cách đến trường) để tăng tính thuyết phục. Giữ độ dài không quá 4–5 câu.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was very young because my family couldn't afford one. However, when I started secondary school at age 11, my mother pushed me to learn to cycle so I could ride to school every day. Cycling gave me more freedom and made it easy to visit my friends after classes.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh tiếng lấp lửng như “Uh” và sửa ngữ pháp cùng từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ “treated us exercise”, “battered bike lines”). Nên bắt đầu với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để giải thích lý do và đưa ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: trong thành phố lớn hoặc khu học đường). Chú ý dùng từ phù hợp như “for exercise”, “bike lanes” và sửa lỗi số ít/những.

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country. Many people ride in the morning for exercise, and others use bicycles for short commutes to work or school. In larger cities, the introduction of dedicated bike lanes has made cycling more convenient and more attractive to commuters.

× Actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family wasn't very wealthy and but when I started secondary school, my mother pushed me once so that I could cycle to school every single day and it gave me more freedom and made it much easier to visit my friends after the class.

✓ Actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family wasn't very wealthy, but when I started secondary school my mother bought me one so I could cycle to school every day; it gave me more freedom and made it much easier to visit my friends after class.

Error type IDs: 16 and 26. The original sentence contains a redundant conjunction 'and but' which is incorrect; use a single conjunction 'but' to connect contrasting ideas. 'Pushed me once' is incorrect collocation for buying a bike — likely intended meaning is 'bought me one.' The phrase 'every single day' is acceptable but 'every day' is more natural here. 'After the class' is incorrect article usage and unnecessary 'the' — use 'after class.' The sentence is long and run-on; separate clauses with appropriate punctuation (comma and semicolon) to improve clarity. Suggestions: remove redundant conjunctions, use correct verb collocation (buy), drop unnecessary articles, and break the sentence into clearer clauses.

× Uh, yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country and it is common to see people cycling only in the morning because many treated us exercise and some also use bikes to commute short distance. Uh, in some city, battered bike lines have made cycling more convenient and attractive.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country and it is common to see people cycling in the mornings because many consider it good exercise, and some also use bikes to commute short distances. In some cities, dedicated bike lanes have made cycling more convenient and more attractive.

Error type IDs: 1, 11, 13, 14, 18, 26. Problems identified: 'bikes' is fine but 'bicycles' is slightly more formal; pluralization errors: 'short distance' should be 'short distances.' 'Only in the morning' is likely incorrect restriction; use 'in the mornings' or 'in the morning' depending on meaning. 'Many treated us exercise' is ungrammatical and wrong word choice — should be 'many consider it good exercise.' 'In some city' should be plural 'in some cities.' 'Battered bike lines' is incorrect word choice/collocation; correct term is 'dedicated bike lanes.' Also add 'more' before 'attractive' or rephrase. Suggestions: use correct plural forms, choose appropriate verbs ('consider'), correct prepositions and noun phrases ('in the mornings', 'short distances', 'in some cities'), and use standard collocations ('bike lanes').