Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, correct minor grammar and timing expressions, and add one specific detail to make your answer more vivid. Use a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details linked smoothly. Avoid filler sounds like "uh" and repeated phrases.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about five years old. I rode it around my neighborhood every afternoon with my friends and my older brother, often practicing turns and races on the quiet streets.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, then expand with specific reasons or an exception using linking words. Correct subject-verb agreement ("bikes are"), avoid filler words, and provide an example or brief comparison to support your point.

예시: Not really — bikes are not very popular in my country because many people cannot afford them and public transport is cheaper. For example, most families prefer buses or motorbikes for daily travel, although bikes are common in some rural areas for short trips.

× Yes, I did. Uh, I had a small red bike when I was around 5:00.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was around five.

Use of '5:00' is inappropriate when referring to age; write the age in words or numerals without a colon. Also remove filler 'Uh' for clarity. Keep past tense 'had' which is correct.

× I used and I used to bike around my home with my friends and my brother every afternoon or sometimes.

✓ I used to ride my bike around my neighborhood with my friends and my brother every afternoon, and sometimes at other times.

The original has 'I used and I used to', which is redundant and ungrammatical. 'Used to' + base verb is the correct structure for past habitual actions. Use 'ride my bike' or 'cycle' instead of 'bike' as a verb. 'Around my home' is awkward; 'around my neighborhood' is clearer. Rephrase 'every afternoon or sometimes' to 'every afternoon, and sometimes at other times' or simply 'most afternoons' for clarity.

× No, it is not popular in my country because it's not affordable for all people.

✓ No, they are not very popular in my country because they are not affordable for everyone.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural), so the pronoun and verb should be plural ('they are'). 'It' incorrectly refers to plural noun. Use 'very popular' or 'popular' with an adverb and 'everyone' is more natural than 'all people'. Ensure subject-verb agreement by matching plural subject with plural verb.