Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too short and does not address the question. Give a direct topic sentence that answers whether you had a bike, then add 1–2 short supporting details (when you had it, who you rode with, or how often). Keep it natural and avoid single-word replies.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I received it as a birthday present when I was seven, and I used to ride it every afternoon around my neighborhood with my friends. It helped me become more independent and fit.

제안: Your answer partly addresses the question but contains grammar issues, vague phrasing and repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then give specific supporting details (where bikes are popular, why people use them, and an example). Use linking words like 'because', 'for example', or 'in particular' to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in parts of my country, especially in smaller cities and suburbs. For example, in Marikina many people use bikes for short trips and exercise because the streets and parks are bike-friendly. Also, cycling has become more common recently due to traffic and health awareness.

× Play.

✓ I used to play (with a bike) when I was a child.

The student replied with a single word 'Play', which lacks a subject and verb structure required for a complete answer. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Provide a complete sentence that fits the past context of the examiner's question. Use 'I used to' or the simple past 'I played' plus an object or phrase to clarify what was played with (for example, 'I used to play with a bike' or 'I used to ride a bike'). Suggestion: Answer in full sentences, matching the past tense of the question: 'I used to ride a bike when I was a child.'.

× I mean, bike is a popular one in our country.

✓ I mean, the bike is a popular means of transport in our country.

The sentence omits the definite article before the noun 'bike' and uses an awkward phrase 'a popular one.' This is an article error (ID 22) and a wording issue. Use 'the bike' to refer to bikes in general or 'bicycles are' to pluralize. Also 'means of transport' or 'mode of transportation' is clearer. Alternatively: 'Bicycles are popular in our country.' Suggestion: Use 'the' when speaking generally about a class in singular ('the bicycle') or use plural ('Bicycles are popular').

× We often use it in the city of Marikina wherein we use bicycle around the playground.

✓ We often use them in the city of Marikina, where people ride bicycles around the playground.

This sentence has several problems: incorrect pronoun reference and number, wrong preposition and relative word choice, and awkward phrasing. The main grammatical issue is preposition/relative clause misuse (ID 11) — 'wherein' is formal and awkward here; use 'where' to refer to a place. Also 'use it' and 'use bicycle' are incorrect: 'ride bicycles' or 'use them' is better, and 'around the playground' is acceptable but 'around the playground' after 'ride' is fine. Correction makes pronouns and plurality consistent: 'them' (bicycles), and 'where' for location. Suggestion: Keep number agreement between subject and pronoun ('bicycles... them'), use 'ride' for bicycles, and use 'where' for relative location: 'We often ride bicycles in the city of Marikina, where people ride them around the playground.'