Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and use past tense consistently. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two concise supporting reasons using proper grammar and linking words. Avoid unnecessary phrases and keep within 3–4 sentences. Include a brief example or detail to make your answer specific.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. The main reason was that I didn't know how to ride, and my parents were worried I might get hurt. For example, I remember feeling nervous about balancing, so they never bought one for me.

제안: Answer directly, then provide specific supporting details and use linking words to organize ideas. Correct grammar (use 'there are' and avoid repetition). Mention who uses bikes, why they are popular, and give an example or contrast to strengthen the answer.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them for short commutes and exercise because they are cheap and convenient. For instance, students and office workers often cycle to avoid traffic, and there are many types of bikes available, from basic models to high-end expensive ones.

× No, I have no bike when I was traveled because when I was tired I don't know how to ride bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because when I was tired I didn't know how to ride a bike.

This sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. The examiner asked about childhood, so past tense should be used consistently (didn't have, didn't know). 'I was traveled' is ungrammatical; use 'when I was a child' or omit. Also include the article 'a' before 'bike'. Suggestion: keep all verbs in past tense for past events and use correct subject-verb forms and articles. Grammar Problem Type ID:6

× So I think that's the main reason we have no bike.

✓ So I think that's the main reason we had no bike.

The sentence uses present tense 'have' while referring to a past situation; change to past 'had'. Also 'we' is acceptable if referring to the family, but tense must match. Suggestion: use past tense 'had' for past circumstances. Grammar Problem Type ID:1

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because many people, especially many citizens, like to ride bikes and in my country they are so many types of bikes which are very expensive.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because many people, especially many citizens, like to ride them, and there are many types of bikes that are very expensive.

The original mixes structures and has word order issues. 'They are so many types of bikes' is incorrect word order and lacks the existential 'there are'. Use 'there are many types of bikes'. Use 'ride them' to avoid repetition. Replace 'which are' with 'that are' or keep 'which are' after a comma; here 'that are' is natural. Ensure present tense is consistent. Suggestion: use 'there are' for existence and correct relative clause 'that are very expensive'. Grammar Problem Type ID:6}]}} PMID: none.