Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. You should respond directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then give 1–2 short supporting details. Use correct verb forms and simple vocabulary. For example, say whether you had a bike, when or why you did or did not, and one brief reason or memory. Keep it natural and concise (1–3 sentences).

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a small apartment and we often walked or used public transport, so there wasn't space for a bicycle.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and confusing. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) and follow with specific, coherent reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, also). Avoid repeating words. Mention who uses bikes, popular styles, and reasons for popularity. Keep answers to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and office workers commute by bicycle, and recently electric bikes and white-colored models have become fashionable.

× No, I have not awake when I am tired.

✓ No, I did not have one when I was a child.

The student is answering a past-time question about childhood, so past tense should be used. 'Have not awake' is ungrammatical: 'awake' is an adjective/verb form and not used with 'have not' here. Use the past simple 'did not have' for possession in the past, and 'when I was tired' is inappropriate for the time frame; replace with 'when I was a child' to match the examiner's question. Suggestion: use simple past for past situations (did not have) and keep time expressions consistent (when I was a child).

× Yes, white is very trending in our our country because everybody is everybody is everybody wants to ride the bike.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because everybody wants to ride them.

The original has repetition and incorrect word choice. 'White is very trending' is unnatural; the examiner asked about bikes in general, so 'bikes are very popular' fits. Remove repeated words ('our our', 'everybody is everybody is everybody') and use correct subject-verb agreement 'everybody wants'. Also replace the singular 'the bike' with the plural pronoun 'them' to refer back to 'bikes'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, match plurality, and use natural collocations ('popular' or 'trending' with appropriate nouns).

× Everybody like the bike who different different pattern, different, different some races like.

✓ Everybody likes bikes with different patterns; people of different ages like them.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement ('Everybody like' -> 'Everybody likes'), incorrect singular/plural choice ('the bike' -> 'bikes'), and unclear phrase 'who different different pattern'. Clarify meaning: 'bikes with different patterns' and express 'some races' likely intended 'some ages' or 'some groups'; here 'people of different ages' is a clearer expression. Also ensure pronoun agreement: 'them' refers to 'bikes'. Suggestion: use correct verb form for 'everybody', choose appropriate nouns ('ages' or 'groups' instead of 'races' if intended), and make the modifier clear ('with different patterns').