Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more concise, correct grammar, and add a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Avoid repetition and ensure tense consistency.

예시: Yes. I got my first bike when I was ten and I often rode it with my cousins and friends after school. For example, we would race along the neighborhood streets and stop at the park, which made those afternoons really fun.

제안: Provide a clear main opinion, give two specific reasons with linking words, and fix incomplete phrases. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘popular’, ‘practical’, ‘exercise’, ‘costs’) and a complete final clause.

예시: Yes, I think bikes have become very popular in the Philippines, especially during the pandemic, because they are a practical way to exercise and avoid crowded public transport. In addition, rising fuel prices have made cycling a cheaper alternative for many people.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was 10 years old and I used to play with it with my cousins and friends and also I like to play with it during I had the time and when I got back from school.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 10 years old and I used to play with it with my cousins and friends. I also liked to play with it when I had time and when I got back from school.

Multiple issues: 5: Past tense issue and 6: Present tense issue and 26: Sentence structure errors. The student mixes past and present tense (says 'I used to play' and then 'I like to play' though describing childhood). Correct by using past tense consistently: 'I also liked to play' and simplify the sentence by splitting into two for clarity. Replace 'during I had the time' with 'when I had time' for natural preposition and structure.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in the Philippines especially during pandemic because most of the people resort to this kind of exercise and activity and as well as today since gasoline and fuels are so.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in the Philippines, especially during the pandemic, because many people resorted to this kind of exercise and activity, and they still do today since gasoline and fuel are expensive.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions/phrasing, 5: Past tense issue, 14: Incorrect use of quantifiers, 22: Article errors, and 26: Sentence structure errors. Use 'during the pandemic' (include definite article), use 'many people' instead of 'most of the people' for naturalness, match tense ('resorted' during pandemic), and clarify 'they still do today'. Replace vague 'since gasoline and fuels are so' with 'since gasoline and fuel are expensive' to complete the comparison and fix missing adjective.