Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two brief supporting details. Use correct past-tense form (I didn't have) and prefer consistent vocabulary (bike or bicycle). Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, but I had a small bicycle. I learned to ride it in my neighborhood when I was about six, and my parents often took me to the park so I could practise.

제안: Give a clear opinion and specific reasons. Begin with a direct answer (Yes or No), then add one or two concrete reasons using linking words (because, although, for example). Avoid fillers and unclear phrases. Explain what you mean by “rules” (e.g., traffic laws, infrastructure) to make your point specific.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and errands. However, cycling can be unsafe in some areas because traffic laws are weak and there are few dedicated bike lanes, so many riders choose bicycles despite the risks.

× Umm, actually I don't had a bike, but I had a cycle.

✓ Umm, actually I didn't have a bike, but I had a cycle.

The student used 'don't had', which mixes present simple negative 'do not' with past tense 'had'. For past simple negatives use 'did not' + base verb: 'didn't have'. Suggestion: Use 'didn't have' for past negative statements; keep 'had' for affirmative past sentences. ID:5

× Uh, of course Bygar Popular actually in my country because, uh, in my country the rule is not good actually, that's why.

✓ Uh, of course bikes are popular in my country because the traffic rules are not good, that's why.

The original sentence has several issues: 'Bygar Popular' appears to be a word order/choice error and missing verb; 'popular' needs a verb 'are' with the plural subject 'bikes'. Also 'the rule is not good' is awkward and should be plural and specific: 'the traffic rules are not good'. Suggestion: Use subject-verb agreement ('bikes are popular') and choose appropriate nouns ('traffic rules') and keep tense consistent. ID:13