Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct, grammatically correct answer about past possession and avoid irrelevant or contradictory details. Start with a clear topic sentence about whether you had a bike as a child, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., who gave it to you, how often you rode it, or a short memory). Keep answers natural and concise, using past tense for past events and avoiding unnecessary statements about your current age unless relevant.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a red bike when I was a child that my parents gave me for my eighth birthday. I used to ride it to the park almost every afternoon, and I remember learning to ride without training wheels with my older brother's help.

제안: Provide a direct opinion and then support it with specific reasons or examples, using plural agreement and linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "Yes, I think bikes are popular"), then add 1–2 supporting details such as where people use bikes, who uses them, or why they are popular (cost, convenience, environment). Use linking words like 'because', 'for example' or 'also' to make the response coherent.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, students and workers often cycle to school or the market since it's cheap and convenient, and there are also many bike lanes in larger cities.

× Yes, I have right now.

✓ Yes, I have one right now.

Student used 'have' without an object after being asked about owning a bike. This is a present tense usage requiring a noun ('one' or 'a bike') to be clear. Add the object 'one' or 'a bike' to complete the sentence and match the present tense context. Suggestion: Say 'Yes, I have one right now.' or 'Yes, I have a bike right now.'

× Also, I'm right now a child.

✓ Also, I'm a child right now.

Word order is awkward: the adverbial phrase 'right now' should come after the verb phrase or at sentence edges for natural English. Use 'I'm a child right now.' to keep present tense and natural adverb placement. Suggestion: Say 'Also, I'm a child right now.'

× I'm eleven years old.

✓ I'm eleven years old.

The sentence is grammatically correct; however in context of the first question (Did you have a bike when you were a child?) the student contradicts themselves by claiming to be a child now. No grammatical correction needed. Keep as is but avoid contradictory content. Suggestion: If meaning is intended as past, use 'I was eleven years old then.'

× Yes, it is.

✓ Yes, they are.

Examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' 'Bikes' is plural, so the correct short answer uses plural pronoun and verb: 'they are' or simply 'yes, they are.' Using 'it is' mismatches number. Suggestion: Say 'Yes, they are.' or 'Yes, bikes are.'