Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, correct grammar, use a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and correct tense/verb forms. Use linking words for coherence (e.g., "and," "because," "so").

예시: Yes. I had a bike as a child. My dad gave it to me as a birthday present, and I loved riding it around the neighborhood because it felt freeing and fun.

제안: Start with a clear direct answer, then add one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (e.g., "however," "because"). Correct phrasing ("on the other hand" not "another hand") and avoid repetition of phrases like "in my country."

예시: Not really. Cars and motorbikes are more common in cities because they are faster for commuting; however, in rural areas people often use bicycles for short trips and transporting goods.

× every child get a bike when they were a child

✓ every child got a bike when they were a child

Subject 'every child' is singular and requires singular verb form; 'get' should be past tense 'got' to match 'were' (past). Use 'every' with singular agreement and consistent past tense: 'every child got'. Suggestion: change 'get' to 'got' to reflect singular subject and past tense.

× and me too my my dad give me a bike at as a present on my birthday

✓ and me too, my dad gave me a bike as a present on my birthday

The clause refers to a past action by a third person singular subject 'my dad', so the verb must be past tense 'gave' rather than 'give'. Also remove the extra 'my' and the unnecessary preposition 'at'. Suggestion: use 'gave' for past actions by third person singular and simplify to 'as a present'.

× so I very very love it

✓ so I loved it very much

'Love' in this context is a past action, so use past tense 'loved'. Repetition 'very very' is informal and adverb placement is awkward; use 'very much' after the verb to modify it correctly. Suggestion: use 'loved it very much' for correct tense and natural adverb placement.

× Not really because in my country car and motorbike are more popular in my country

✓ Not really, because cars and motorbikes are more popular in my country

Use plural nouns 'cars' and 'motorbikes' when speaking generally. Also remove the repeated phrase 'in my country'. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns when referring to them generally and avoid repetition.

× but in another hand in some places like the countryside they often use bike to transport

✓ but on the other hand, in some places like the countryside they often use bikes for transport

The correct expression is 'on the other hand'. 'Use bike' should be plural 'use bikes' when speaking generally, and 'for transport' is the proper prepositional phrase. Add commas for clarity. Suggestion: say 'on the other hand' and 'use bikes for transport' and add commas to separate clauses.