Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and direct, which is good, but it is very brief and lacks supporting detail. To improve, add a topic sentence then one or two specific reasons or a short example. Use a linking phrase to connect ideas (for example, “because” or “so”). Keep responses natural and within five sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was unsafe for the roads near our home. As a result, I usually walked to school or took public transport, and I only learned to ride a bike later as a teenager.

제안: This answer is confusing and contradicts itself (saying you don’t see people riding bicycles but then saying people like to use bikes). To improve, give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific evidence or examples and use linking words such as “however” or “because.” Also correct vocabulary: distinguish between “bicycle” and other similar terms and avoid repetition.

예시: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my city because most people prefer cars and motorcycles for daily travel. However, in some parks and university areas you can still see students and fitness enthusiasts riding bikes for exercise and leisure.

× Usually I don't see people riding a bicycle since people here mostly like to use bike.

✓ Usually I don't see people riding bicycles, since people here mostly like to use cars.

The original sentence has quantifier and noun use issues: 'a bicycle' is singular with 'people' (plural), and 'use bike' omits an article and likely meant a different mode of transport; context implies contrast between bicycles and other transport. Change 'a bicycle' to the plural 'bicycles' to match 'people', and change 'use bike' to 'use cars' (or 'use bikes' with consistent meaning). Also add a comma before 'since' for clarity. Suggestions: decide whether you mean 'bicycles' or 'bikes' and keep consistent plural forms; include appropriate articles when using singular nouns.