Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and direct. Start with a concise topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep sentences short and grammatically correct, and avoid repetition. For example, state whether you had a bike, explain the main reason, and add a brief consequence or comparison.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents only bought bikes for older teenagers, so I couldn't afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school or used public transport.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific details and linking words. Use accurate age ranges and mention reasons for popularity (cost, convenience, culture) rather than vague references. Avoid repeating words and finish the sentence with a concrete example.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people aged about 18 to 60 use motorbikes because they are affordable and convenient in heavy traffic. For example, teenagers often ride small scooters, while some adults prefer larger brands like Honda or BMW for longer trips.

× No, I didn't have any bike because somebody should know what after the age of the adult only my parents will be buy or myself will be by the bike for my own money.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because my parents would buy one only after I became an adult, or I would buy a bike with my own money.

The original sentence has multiple structure and tense issues (Grammar problem type ID 26). It mixes modal verbs, incorrect word order, and awkward phrases ('somebody should know what', 'after the age of the adult', 'will be buy', 'myself will be by'). I corrected the sentence to a clear past-tense statement that fits the question about childhood: use 'didn't have' then explain reasons using past/modal forms: 'my parents would buy one only after I became an adult' and 'I would buy a bike with my own money.' Suggestion: break complex ideas into shorter clauses, use correct verb forms (would buy, became), and maintain logical word order (subject + modal/auxiliary + verb).

× So most of the children's, I think most of the children's didn't buy the bike.

✓ So most of the children, I think, didn't have bikes.

This contains a singular/plural and article error (Grammar problem type ID 1 and 22). 'Children's' is the possessive form and incorrect here; use 'children' plural. Also 'didn't buy the bike' is unnatural—use 'didn't have bikes' or 'didn't buy bikes.' I changed to 'most of the children' and 'didn't have bikes.' Suggestion: use plural nouns without apostrophe for plural (children), and choose appropriate verbs ('have' or 'buy') with matching plural noun forms.

× That's it, Yeah.

✓ That's it. Yes.

This is a minor style and sentence structure issue (Grammar problem type ID 26). The original uses casual filler 'Yeah' and comma splice. I replaced with 'That's it. Yes.' to make two short, grammatically correct utterances appropriate for a test context. Suggestion: avoid run-on or comma-spliced fragments; use clear short sentences.

× Yeah of course my my country, most of the peoples are using the bikes are on the 18 age about to the till 60s and 70s and the bike is a very popular and for the teenage children and for the adults who like the companies bike like Ninja, BMW and.

✓ Yes, of course. In my country, most people use bikes from about age 18 up to their 60s and 70s. Bikes are very popular with teenagers and with adults who like brands such as Ninja and BMW.

This sentence has several problems: plural and count noun misuse and verb agreement (Grammar problem type ID 1 and 27), incorrect prepositions and word order (ID 11 and 26), and third-person verb issues ('peoples are using the bikes are' is incorrect; ID 2). I corrected 'most of the peoples' to 'most people' and used present simple 'use' for habitual action. I clarified age range ('from about age 18 up to their 60s and 70s') and rephrased the latter part to 'Bikes are very popular with teenagers and with adults who like brands such as Ninja and BMW.' Suggestion: use 'people' not 'peoples' for general population, use present simple for habits, and place prepositions and modifiers in standard positions (e.g., 'popular with', 'from...to').