Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve accuracy, tense, and add a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense (because the question asks about childhood), then give one or two specific details (when you got it, how you used it). Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven and used to ride to the park with my friends every weekend, which helped me become more confident on the road.

제안: Make the answer direct and coherent. State your opinion clearly, then give specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, for instance, also). Avoid unrelated or unclear phrases (e.g. “have a bag”). Keep to two or three clear sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many children and teenagers ride bikes for fun and to get around short distances, and there are several cycling clubs and bike lanes in larger cities.

× Yes, I do have one.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past-tense question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' The student used a present-tense response 'I do have one,' which is inconsistent. Use past tense 'I did' or 'I had one' to match the question. Suggestion: answer past-tense questions with past-tense verbs (e.g., 'Yes, I had one' or 'Yes, I did').

× Yes, because some kids here in my country also have a bag and I'm already a teenager now and they use bike for fun.

✓ Yes. In my country some children have bicycles for fun; now that I'm a teenager, I also use a bike for leisure.

The original sentence is run-on and contains unclear or incorrect word choices ('bag' likely intended 'bike', missing articles, and awkward clause links). This is a sentence-structure and word-choice problem. Corrections: replace 'bag' with 'bikes' or 'bicycle', add articles where needed ('a bike'), use consistent tense and clear clause boundaries. Suggestion: split into shorter sentences, use correct nouns ('children' or 'kids' and 'bikes'), and maintain consistent subject references (e.g., 'some children... they use bikes' or 'I also use a bike').