Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 질문에 직접적으로 답한 것은 좋습니다. 다만 답변이 너무 짧고 추가 설명이 없어 점수를 높이기 어렵습니다. 구조적으로 주제문을 제시한 뒤 짧은 이유나 상황을 덧붙이세요. 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 이어가고, 구체적인 내용(예: 왜 없었는지, 집 근처의 교통수단 등)을 포함하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

예시: No, I didn't. I grew up in a small town where most families didn't own bikes, so I usually walked to school. Also, my parents preferred that we focus on studying rather than outdoor activities, so I rarely had the chance to ride one.

제안: 의견을 제시하려는 시도는 있었지만 반복 표현(“to, uh, to”)과 모호한 표현(“or something”) 때문에 자연스럽지 못했습니다. 명확한 주제문을 말한 뒤 이유와 구체적인 예를 연결어로 덧붙이세요. 또한 말 흐름을 매끄럽게 하기 위해 불필요한 중간 음(uh)을 줄이도록 연습하세요.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially in cities. For example, many restaurants and delivery companies use motorbikes and bicycles to deliver food quickly, and they are also common for short trips because traffic can be heavy.

× Yes, bikes are used to, uh, to delivery some food or something to deliver it.

✓ Yes, bikes are used to deliver food or to make deliveries.

The original sentence misused the verb 'delivery' (a noun) where the base verb 'deliver' is required, and had redundant phrases ('to, uh, to' and 'or something to deliver it'). This is a verb form and sentence structure issue. Use the infinitive 'to deliver' after 'used to' in the passive sense 'are used to deliver'. Alternatively, 'to make deliveries' is a natural phrase. Remove hesitation and redundancy for clarity.