Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Corrigez la grammaire et la structure pour rendre la réponse plus naturelle et logique. Par exemple, utilisez le passé simple correctement (didn't have / borrowed / received), évitez les erreurs de concordance et reformulez pour être plus concise. Donnez une phrase principale claire puis 1-2 détails de soutien avec des mots de liaison comme "so" ou "then".

예시: I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. So, I often borrowed a bike from a friend to ride around the neighborhood. Then, when I was ten, I finally received my own bike as a gift.

제안: Améliorez la précision et le vocabulaire. Remplacez "too popular" par "very popular" ou "quite popular" selon le sens voulu, et corrigez les constructions (e.g. "They are useful for saving time and avoiding traffic"). Ajoutez un exemple concret ou une raison supplémentaire en utilisant un connecteur comme "because" ou "for example".

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and practical. For example, many people cycle to work to avoid traffic jams and save money on transportation.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't owns ones.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't own one.

The modal verb 'could' should be followed by the base form 'own', not 'owns'. 'Ones' is incorrect here; use 'one' to refer to a single bike. Suggestion: after modals (can/could/must/should) always use the base verb form; use 'one' as a singular pronoun to replace 'a bike'.

× I usually work with my friend and borrow it one I eventually receives a bike as a gift.

✓ I usually worked with my friend and borrowed his bike until I eventually received a bike as a gift.

The context refers to childhood (past), so past tense verbs are required: 'worked', 'borrowed', 'received'. 'Borrow it one' is ungrammatical — use 'borrowed his bike' or 'borrowed one'. 'Receives' is third-person singular present; change to past 'received'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently for past events and use clear references for objects ('his bike' or 'one').

× Yes, I think it's too popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country.

'It's too popular' is incorrect: 'it' is a singular pronoun but 'bikes' is plural; also 'too popular' implies excessive popularity (negative nuance). Use 'bicycles are very popular' to express general popularity. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs/pronouns and choose adverbs ('very' rather than 'too') when stating popularity neutrally.

× They have a benefit to save time and avoid traffic cars.

✓ They are useful for saving time and avoiding traffic.

'Have a benefit to' is unnatural; use 'are useful for' or 'help to'. 'Avoid traffic cars' is incorrect collocation; 'traffic' alone is sufficient. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'useful for saving time' and 'avoiding traffic' and prefer gerunds after prepositions ('for saving', 'avoiding').