Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid asking the examiner "Why?" — that's unnecessary and can sound unnatural. Use past-tense details and a linking word if you add more information.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a blue bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend. Because of that, I became quite confident riding on busy streets.

제안: Improve grammar and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms and plural agreement, and replace filler phrases like "or I don't know". Add one or two specific reasons or examples with a linking word (e.g., "because" or "for example").

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for daily commuting. For example, students and office workers ride bikes to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× Oh yes, the bikes here is very popular in my country because people use it every day to go to their works or to just take a ride or I don't know.

✓ Oh yes, bikes are very popular in my country because people use them every day to go to work or just to take a ride.

The subject 'bikes' is plural so the verb must be 'are' (third person plural) not 'is' (Grammar Problem Type ID 2). 'It' should be 'them' to match the plural noun (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). 'Works' is incorrect here; use the uncountable noun 'work' when referring to employment in general (Incorrect use of quantifiers/article/noun form, ID 14/22). Remove filler 'or I don't know' for clarity and formality. Also streamline 'to just take a ride' to 'just to take a ride' for natural word order.