Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct response with a short topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "but"). Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight, and I used it to ride to my friend's house every afternoon because there were no nearby bus routes. As a result, I became quite confident riding in traffic.

제안: Your answer is short and contains errors (repeating 'Mike', wrong country reference). Start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then add one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (e.g., "for example", "because"). Use correct vocabulary and grammar.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you often see dedicated bike lanes and shared bike programs, so cycling has become a convenient option for daily travel.

× Yes, I think Mike is very popular in other country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

The original sentence uses 'Mike' which is a personal name and does not match the question about 'bikes', indicating a pronoun/word choice error. Additionally 'in other country' is incorrect preposition/article usage; it should be 'in my country' to answer about the student's country. Correction aligns subject (bikes) with the question and uses the correct preposition and possessive adjective. Suggestion: ensure the noun you refer to matches the question's topic and use 'my country' when speaking about your own country; use 'in another country' only when referring to a different country.