Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve naturalness and coherence. Start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two linked supporting details (use linking words like “when” or “since”) and avoid redundant phrasing such as “after that I have been able to ride a bicycle.” Also vary vocabulary (e.g., use “learned to ride” instead of “taught me”).

예시: Yes — I had a bike as a child. My father taught me to ride in a nearby park when I was seven, and I rode it every weekend, which helped me become confident on the road. Since then, cycling has remained one of my favorite activities.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but is brief and could be more specific and organized. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example “for example” or “because”). Mention other factors (cost, convenience, environment) to enrich content and use more natural phrasing (e.g., “too narrow for cars” instead of “can't actually drive through”).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many residential streets are too narrow for cars, so people prefer bicycles for short trips. In addition, cycling is cheaper and more convenient in congested areas, which makes it a common choice for commuters.

× Yes I did. My father taught me in a nearby park how to ride a bicycle when I was 7 and after that I have been able to ride a bicycle.

✓ Yes, I did. My father taught me how to ride a bicycle in a nearby park when I was seven, and after that I was able to ride a bicycle.

The sentence mixes past simple ('taught') with present perfect ('have been able') though the action refers to a specific past time ('when I was seven'), so past simple should be used consistently. Use 'was able' to indicate the ability acquired at that past time. Also add commas and spell out 'seven' for clarity.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. First of all, the roads are very narrow, so many cars can't actually drive through these roads that are near houses.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. First of all, the roads are very narrow, so many cars can't actually drive on these roads near houses.

The verb 'drive' typically takes the preposition 'on' when referring to roads. Using 'drive through' suggests passing entirely from one side to the other, which is less appropriate here. Also 'these roads that are near houses' is wordy; 'these roads near houses' is more natural.