Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban terlalu singkat dan tata bahasa salah (seharusnya past tense). Berikan kalimat topik yang jelas dan tambahkan 1–2 detail pendukung menggunakan kata penghubung jika perlu. Contoh fokus: kapan kamu mendapatinya dan bagaimana kamu menggunakannya sebagai anak-anak.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was about eight years old, which my parents bought for me as a birthday present. I used it almost every day to ride around the neighborhood and visit my friends, so it became one of my favorite toys.

제안: Jawaban benar arah tapi agak tidak alami dan ada kesalahan struktur. Hindari filler seperti “Umm” dan gunakan kalimat topik yang jelas, lalu dukung dengan alasan spesifik dan perbandingan menggunakan kata penghubung seperti "because" atau "however".

예시: Not really. Cars are much more popular in my country because many people prefer them for comfort and longer distances, and public infrastructure often favors cars over bicycles. However, cycling is becoming more common in some cities due to traffic congestion and health awareness.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about possession in the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense; 'did' is the appropriate short answer to a past simple question. Suggestion: use 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× Umm, I don't think so. I think the more popular in my country is car.

✓ Umm, I don't think so. I think cars are more popular in my country.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and article/number usage. 'The more popular in my country is car' is ungrammatical: 'more popular' needs a comparison target and the noun should be plural ('cars') when speaking generally. Also use subject-verb agreement: 'cars are'. Suggestion: say 'I think cars are more popular in my country' or 'I think the car is more popular' only if referring to a specific car type.