Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Directly answer in past tense, correct grammar, and add one short supporting detail. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences). Use linking words if you add details.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or used public transport because my family lived in a busy city. Nowadays I sometimes borrow a bike for short trips.

제안: Give a clear opinion, use clearer vocabulary and grammar, and add specific reasons or examples using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "however"). Keep it under five sentences and avoid filler words like "uh".

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Bangladesh because cities are densely populated and traffic is heavy. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes and deliveries since they are cheaper and easier to park. However, in larger cities motorcycles are more common for longer trips.

× No, I don't have a bike in my child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. The original sentence incorrectly uses present simple ('don't have') and an incorrect phrase 'in my child'. Use past simple 'didn't have' and the correct prepositional phrase 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: match the tense to the time reference and use correct time expressions (e.g., 'when I was a child').

× Uh, yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because, uh, Bangladesh has so many populated and vehicles area. Uh, so.

✓ Uh, yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because Bangladesh is densely populated and has many vehicles.

The answer should use present tense to state a general fact, which is correct, but the student used incorrect word order and word choice: 'has so many populated and vehicles area' is ungrammatical. Use the adjective 'densely populated' to describe Bangladesh and include a proper verb for 'has many vehicles' or 'many vehicles on the roads'. Suggestion: simplify and use correct collocations: 'densely populated' and 'has many vehicles' or 'has heavy traffic'.