Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (past tense and possessive), make the response more natural and concise, and add one brief supporting detail. Use a clear topic sentence in past tense, then a linked reason or memory. Avoid fillers like 'umm' and repetition.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for my birthday, and I remember riding it around the neighborhood every afternoon with my friends.

제안: Give a clear direct opinion first, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (avoid double negatives) and reduce repetition. Use vocabulary like 'popular', 'athletes', 'commuting', and 'recreational'.

예시: Not really — bikes are popular mainly among athletes and hobbyists. For example, my sister enjoys cycling for exercise, but most people prefer motorcycles or cars for commuting, so biking isn't common for daily transport.

× Yeah, I have a bike.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike.

The question asks about possession in the past (when you were a child), so present tense 'have' is incorrect. Change to past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Suggestion: Use past simple ('had') when referring to past possession.

× When my dad's buy me the bike because, umm, he buy me for my birthday.

✓ When my dad bought me the bike because he bought it for my birthday.

Multiple issues: 'dad's buy' is an incorrect contraction and present tense; 'buy me' is present tense. Use past simple 'bought' to match past time. Also replace the pronoun or object reference with 'it' after first mention. Suggestion: Use 'bought' for past actions and 'it' as the object pronoun for the bike.

× he buy me for my birthday.

✓ he bought it for my birthday.

This clause describes a past action but uses present tense 'buy'. Change to past simple 'bought'. Also add 'it' to refer back to 'the bike'. Suggestion: Use past simple for completed actions in the past and include the object pronoun when appropriate.

× Not really some some sports people like the riding the bikes like my sister like loves the bike, but I'm not don't like the bike not I'm not use using the bike.

✓ Not really. Some sporty people like riding bikes; for example, my sister loves her bike, but I don't like or use a bike.

This sentence has multiple structure and redundancy problems: repeated words ('some some'), incorrect determiners ('the riding the bikes'), mixed and doubled negatives ('I'm not don't like', 'not I'm not use using'), and awkward phrasing. Corrections: separate into clearer clauses, use 'some' once, 'sporty' or 'sportspeople', gerund 'riding bikes' without 'the', use 'loves her bike' for possession, and use 'I don't like or use a bike' (simple negative present) to express current attitude. Suggestion: Break complex thoughts into short sentences, avoid double negatives, remove repeated words, use gerunds correctly (riding bikes), and keep tense consistent.